Answer: The excerpt should be revised because it contains a dependent clause that leaves the writer's thought unfinished.
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Philosophical Explanations is a 1981 metaphysical epistemological and ethical treatise by the philosopher Robert Nozick.. The book received positive reviews . Commentators have compared Philosophical Explanations to the philosopher Richard Rorty's Philosophy and the Mirror of Nature (1979) and praised it for Nozick's discussions of the fundamental questions of philosophy and of topics such …

DeBow's Review was a widely circulated magazine of "agricultural commercial and industrial progress and resource" in the American South during the upper middle of the nineteenth century from 1846 until 1884. Before the Civil War the magazine "recommended the best practices for wringing profits from slaves". It bore the name of its first editor James Dunwoody Brownson DeBow (J. D. B. DeBow ...

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